Twinkle4ever

Hi! I really like this. I wish every try-to-be-cool-guy would read this and learn a lesson from it. The title's quite catchy and Am I funny, am I well-dressed? Do ...

Hello. I can't believe that you're new to this. You seem to do pretty well here. If you hadn't mentioned that, I would've probably thought you do poetry more than ...

Hello! Your poem is quite fascinating. I like your ideas here about 'The Me and the You that Hope'. The title is perfect for it. And the way you've differentiated ...

Hi! First of all, I would like to know whether the bird is a phoenix because it definitely seems like it to me. Anyway, I like the shades and the ...

Oh I love your drawings girl!! :D I can't believe that they're just doodles you did in class. (Something I often do too in my class when I'm bored lol) ...

Hi! First I would like to comment on the manga girl since it's what I do mostly. The face: I would advice you to shorten the face of the girl. ...

For all those who are confused. This is just to inform you guys that irruption means invasion or attack. (Just so you don't mistake it for eruption) Thanks for reviewing! ...

Okay so here are two more sketchings. I took reference from google images (both of them). The scan of the first picture is not so good. The shades are not ...

Awwww.... Okay I read the poem and I love the theme of the little bird with the broken wing. You've got a hidden poet in you. The poem was simple ...

I sat down at the base of the tree. It was a respectable distance from the girls who were eying me warily Okay I'm not sure whether it's supposed to ...

Hi there. Okay, it was too long but I managed to read it. I haven't read the previous parts but I think I get the idea about what's going on ...

First of all I'd like to ask you. Is the story teller a girl? Because I can't really distinguish that. I haven't read the first part but I feel as ...

Hey Starlight9. It's been a long time. Okay, here's my review! :) The first sketch is pretty good. You only used the eraser two times so that makes it super ...

Okay. So here's more of the story. I added a few more paragraphs so I hope I'm not showing too much here rather than telling. “No, no, and no. That’s ...

Hey! I read the story as requested but I didn't read the comments that were given below it so please ignore it if I repeat something they've already stated. First ...