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Twinkle4ever

  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Charlie

    There's a lot of suspense in this story. Alright, here's my review. I think the dialogues are chosen perfectly here. What I mean is that the way of talking describes ...

    Dec 2, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Batman :D

    Woah! I like the effects here black. They make batman look fierce and brave. And the idea about doing it in black and white was pretty good. It couldn't have ...

    Dec 1, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Pirate Skull

    This is pretty good. Pirates always do look scary. Especially when they're one of the undeads. :) I'd rather not stare at the hook. It's too real. You're getting better ...

    Nov 6, 2011
  • Other Re: Cholerparagon - Profile

    Another dragon! I love it! It's so perfect. I wonder how long it might have taken you to make all the scales. What I love most about it are the ...

    Nov 6, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Mister Punkin Head

    Wow Payne! This is really good. You've improved since the last time I commented on your drawings. The thing I like the most about this drawing is that you've shaded ...

    Oct 31, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Contest entry for Horror theme

    So here's the sketch. I was planning to color it but I think it looks better in black and white

    Oct 30, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Artist Arena "Horror" Contest Entry

    Wow! You're amazing (again!) It was really scary. It fits the theme and you've gotten better with the arms. Still the left (my left) arm need just a little work. ...

    Oct 28, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: The Real Story

    Sorry for the late reply as I was having some technical difficulties with my computer but here I am now. I think you did a great job in grasping my ...

    Oct 28, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Manga Girl

    Hey I finally got time to review something and I thought here's something good. I can't say it's as good as your previous drawings. The proportions are a little out ...

    Oct 15, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Chibi Len Kagamine

    The eyes are soooo cute! You're good with greyscale drawings. I love the little boy. you've got real talent... I don't know how many people must've said that to you. ...

    Oct 8, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: i love you mommy.

    Awww... that was so touching! :) It made me want to cry. You really have a talent for expressing emotions. I salute you for that. Throughout the poem, you kept ...

    Oct 8, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: A quick character sketch

    I like the background here. The mountains look pretty well drawn. And what is that cute little animal on the person's shoulder? It's so adorable. You colored it wisely (I ...

    Sep 30, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Character Portrait

    Hi! Sorry I didn't get a chance to review your work. I only *liked* it. But here I am. (Okay so I didn't read the comments obove so ignore it ...

    Sep 30, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Faynt

    Hey! Nice name for the character, Faynt. Love it :). Firstly, I would agree with what Payne said about the arms but not the thumb. It could be a pointed ...

    Sep 30, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: A chaotic scene

    “Home sweet home!” I shouted merrily. I marched into my apartment heading straight for the window. I lifted the wooden pane and heard a loud crash followed by an angry ...

    Sep 30, 2011


I would be a terrible novel protagonist.
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