Twinflower

Cadenza walked along the road towards the hills that rose up into the forest. The town was quiet, the occasional dog bark or donkey bray the only sounds to drift ...

Chapter 4 “We belong to a secret group called the Silent Choir,” Viola said, once Cadenza had returned. Her amber eyes looked genuinely sorry for frightening Cadenza as she had, ...

Really good prologue! There was only thing that bothered me: The night was still, and Isaac could hear the man wetting his lips with his tongue. I dunno, but it ...

Listen, Shell is singing A song of wind and sea: Breakers crash And raucous birds Dive and skim the waves. A harsh salty breeze Whips white across the water And ...

Cadenza’s house felt different when she woke the next morning. Her sisters were already up and out of the room, though their day clothes still rested on their unmade beds. ...

I just finished reading the trilogy and loved them all. The first one was really good, fast-paced, full of action and all that. Lirael was good at times but was ...

“Battle wounds?” the shadow asked dryly, coming out of the shadows towards Cadenza so that it was apparent that it was a young woman with short hair cropped close against ...

Very sad but very good too. I liked the description of the vanity up to the "Nail polish - both glittered and non glittered." part. I don't know, but it ...

I just started this a while ago--tell me what you think Is it too long for one post?? I'll post smaller parts if it is. ------------- Cadenza grinned, knowing that ...

Thanks for the reviews!

This has a very beautiful mood to it...sort of like wandering thoughts, but with a solid meaning to it. I especially liked the description of the gate, and I love ...

This had some good ideas in it. The main thing I think you should do is go back over it and add to it. Then it could be a great ...

Very nice imagery. I agree that the apostrophe (apostowotsie?? :D ) in "fright'ning" disrupts the flow. Just putting "frightening" is fine. I think, when you say "the trees hushed" you ...

This is a pretty good start. You got me wondering where this story is going to go. I got the sense that the girl wasn't all that welcome in her ...

There are ghosts in this house They don’t lurk in the dust beneath my bed Or between the musty closet’s clothes They don’t need dark Cellars or attics Only my ...