Twinflower

Dark eyes beneath black hair match The midnight forever on your face. The sorrowed, solemn beauty of heartbreak Rarely broken by a sunlit smile. The others watch you, Eager admiration ...

Thanks! I really like that foot too, somehow... :D

A few pictures of people/musical symbols...a treble clef, bass clef, and an eighth note. I colored these with pastel pencils.

I like the first picture the best--what a cool tree! I also like the background of the fourth picture, though the flower in front is blurry.

Away she steals beneath the midnight sky, An eager gleam shining in her green eyes, And escapes the memories left behind; The night air soothes her face and clears her ...

I'm not sure I can offer any advice on how to improve this, but I can say that I really enjoyed it. You're writing is very descriptive and the pace ...

First of all, try editing out all the punctuation, grammar, and spelling errors. That will make it so people will read through it and comment on the actual writing rather ...

Overall, it's nice. you have some good imagery, though a little cliched. It describes a pretty picture but oher than that, i didn't find much meaning. I like the sound ...

Some pics from my trip to the east coast and PEI and Quebec:

Hey there! First, you should start by spacing out the paragraphs so that it's easier for people to read it. The hiss like [hiss-like] screams of the creatures were amplified ...

I can't even remember when exactly i started writing, but i have tons and tons of little picture books that i made before i could write, and my first "published" ...

Autumn Sweet summer’s breath fades, Green life pierced through with autumn’s blade; Time has weakened season-old leaves, And the wind with careless ease, Plucks them from the yellowed trees. But ...

Ooo! A story with violinists in it! Very cool. I like the description of their performance. the music and dancing is described quite well too, but i didn't get a ...

Excellent poem, very powerful and melancholy. A deathly chill reaches the field To cover the bodies of the men who dropped. I agree about "reaches" maybe not being the best ...

Her violin is kind of lopsided but other than that i thought this was pretty good...