TwinSeed

The grammar has already been corrected, not that I was gonna nit-pick at that, haha. I agree with Sassykat though, this does appear to be thought out and it's a ...

Okay, COMPLETELY disregard the first two notes if you wish, they're only tid bits of info. As for the third note, that was a poor analogy. With the last sentence ...

I'm writing a novella, if that counts.. I started on sudden inspiration and now have little places to go o-o I need some ideas before I can progress past the ...

Thank you very much. The first stanza probably does seem confusing to a lot of people, so I'll edit the first post to explain. EDIT: DrunkOnWriting: I hadn't even realized ...

I have no particular criticism here, aside from what Balaczter said about the punctuation. And honestly, the part about the box confused me until I read the above critique, so ...

They're beautiful! Just look at all the detail on the bird... And the candle, it's so colorful xoxo I have a question though. How much editing did you do to ...

*This poem was created in approximately 15 minutes; I started on it almost immediately after finish my 9th grade End of Course test for English I* **This poem was published ...

This was... wow. It expresses everything that anyone needs to know to fake insanity xD I loved the stanza: "I lost myself In a river of blood. Over and over. ...

This. Was. Awesome. I only have a couple things to say. "Giggling and laughing, their spirits high Each fairy pairs with another, with no sigh" In the second line here, ...

Thank you people! I wasn't sure how well this was, but now that I have some support, I have more confidence

Allow me to start by saying that I absolutely adore your rhyme scheme! As Elinor said, it doesn't work as well as a free-style would, but it's still nice that ...

*Imagine a female singer, such a Chibi from The Birthday Massacre, as the lead singer* **This song was inspired by both Creature Feature and The Birthday Massacre, two morbid bands ...

I'm not going to go into great detail like Copsonator, I'm not patient enough with myself to review it that thoroughly. Instead, I'll tell you simply how I felt about ...

I love the passion and intensity of it, and how you seemed to change your mind towards the end; specifically, the last two stanzas. Also, the rhyme scheme of your ...

It was very repetitive because of how often you rhymed with the same sound, and that made dulled the story a little for me. I like your use of imagery ...