TwinSeed

This poem was very interesting to read. Very creative. You turned a boring subject into a mysterious story, and I applaud you for that. The imagery was also great, though ...

That's.. quite an imagination o.O Welcome to the site!

I'm not gonna bore you with corrections, that was already, nicely, done above. I like this poem, it's inspiring to people who're feeling down. You're rhyming though; there was no ...

I liked this story; not really any point to it, but short and fun to read. I think that you should indicate earlier that Spark is an Aiger, because, until ...

Thank you Desire & Ceely, your reviews were nice and helpful to my self esteem.

It's blurry to emphasize the smiling thing there. Hehe, I really like this. Your color choice though, Sepia, that doesn't seem very appropriate for this.. B&W maybe? Or full color? ...

Thank you, that's encouraging :)

*I got the rhythm from about 15 seconds of a Coldplay song, Every Teardrop is a Waterfall, before the song bored me and I turned it off* **I tried to ...

Thank you everyone for your help in making this better, but I doubt I'll edit this one or the original on paper (cause I'll probably shred it soon and never ...

I appreciate your kind words, and I promise that many other great poems will follow.

*This poem is very delicate to me, and makes me sad to even look at; it took a lot of self-debating for me to share it here* **I wrote this ...

Personally, I like your use of "mine" in the first stanza; like an old poem. Butbecause none of it aside from that is set in the same form, it just ...

I can't review art like this because, well, it takes and artist to critique art; so I'll just give my simple input. I like what you have so far, but ...

It's a nice poem, creative and expressive. In the first stanza, I'd like to know what the "Sleepless forest" is referring to though.. I find your use of adjectives odd. ...

Hehe, I love how simple this is. Two frames maybe? I dunno. But it even has symbolism n.n The cross I mean, saying that Jojo's a Christian. I like it ...