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Re: Flames of Death
*Yeah, so, I've made three entries e.e* Flames of Death You have to watch the fire , I was reminding myself of her words, nuzzle and care for it. Otherwise, ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: My Style Goth (ish) Drawing
Well now.. isn't this something new ;D Again, I didn't read the other reviews, so don't badger me if I say the same things. His hair, of course, is the ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Clouds
Yeah, so this was taken some time ago. We don't have a fancy camera and I don't wanna edit it.. Enjoy the clouds :D
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Saving a Child (Plot)
The plot could be re-written to reduce confusion and wordiness, but I'm not concerned with that. The first paragraph feels dramatically overused, no offense. It needs a hook, something exciting ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: One of Those Days...; First Edit
Grr, mixed signals. I like your review though, thanks for the support.
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Death of an Angel; Second Edit
That was my goal, thanks.
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Death of an Angel; Second Edit
Thanks Espeon. I don't think that I'll do anything more to this piece though.. I like it the way it is, and I think that I'll keep it just for ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Original Character - Sorcha
She seems so.. odd.. in a bad way.. Her hair's awkward, but that's just because it's such an original style. Proportions are almost thrown out the window (for her arms), ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: deleted
No offense, but I got bored with it halfway through. This could be prevented easily, by adding punctuation and spacing. I'll break this down into different sections, my opinions of ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: One of Those Days...; First Edit
I'm not good at writing stories... I shall keep trying though! I'll think of something...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Snow, bubbles & dark clouds. :O
#1: A bubble? Not just a bubble. It's a super bubble! I really like how you blurred out the background to emphasize the bubbles. Also, I enjoy looking at each ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Hair Therapy
Okay, so I didn't read the long criticism. So don't get upset if I say some of the same things. First of all, I love her hair. It's so colorful. ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [8]
josh: Why so serious? Sorry people, I have no pics at the time, I just stalked this thread to see if I could find anyone that I knew xD
Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: One of Those Days...; First Edit
It's 130 words long now, or around that. I'll consider adding another line, seeing if I can add a connection. Thank you, this was greatly appreciated.
Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: One of Those Days...; First Edit
Thank you for your review :) The last line was saying that she killed her son's pet. If someone else also complains about the last line, I'll remove it.
Jul 30, 2011