TwinCityKitty

Hi Meandbooks! Thank you for your response! I've been craving some constructive criticism. So far, this has only been reviewed by family and friends, so I think people want to ...

Hi Yuriiko! First of all, wow! I can't believe you read the whole thing! You wrote: "I think you have a knack for scene transitions. I%u2019m serious. The middle part ...

Wonderfully written! I'm intrigued to see where Sybil's obsession leads her. Is it weird that I'm worried about her? It doesn't sound like that girl has many friends in the ...