Tusker93

Swirls of ocean blue, or a cloudy desert brown Sparks of emotion lie deep down, Fields of green, or an abyss of black It is magnificence like this the pyramids ...

Is it ice? Is it fire? Is it wind or is it rain? The questions persist while it gains, Unable to prevent, only to protect from it The storm blows ...

I'm looking for comments on the plot, pacing and general feeling of the story as you read it. Pointing out any grammatical/spelling errors are welcome thanks and hope you enjoy ...

Her screams pierced the air, but only I heard it. Only I truly understood them. For the people physically closest to her, they fell on deaf ears. To them she ...

I'd like to thank anyone who's taking the time to read this and any criticism, praise, comments and/or suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Thanks again for your time and I ...

WARNING: If you plan on reviewing this I would advise reading the previous piece as it provides valuable background information. Also, if you have read the previous piece then it's ...

Chapter 2 Aisha stared in amazement at Jasmine’s blue, satin silk dress. “Jasmine!” At first Aisha was lost for words but she continued, “You can’t come out like this!” Aisha ...

This chapter's quite long as well but in my opinion it's a lot more eventful than Chapter One (or Part 2). I'm grateful for any criticisms and comments as always. ...

Cadair IdrisFor our English original writing coursework our school requires us to do an account of a part of our school trip to Cader in Wales... So this is it ...

This WorldDrifting, my mind waivers through realityIt’s cold out here. In our world, time waits for no man, and yet, everyone has once wanted time to stand still.That moment of ...