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:) This is lovely!! I love the idea of the revisiting of old memories being expressed as a window ( :shock: I think thats what you're trying to say) and ...

8/10 'Cause Black and Red are so cool together!!!

This poem is really nice. :D It aptly captures the innocence of a child to the horrors of the world around us. A poignant, moving poem. :cry: :wink:

I really liked it. :P It's so descriptive that you can almost see the events unfold before your eyes. And it has just the right amount of emotion to be ...

This was a nice story. :wink: I quite liked the idea behind it. However I think a bit more description in needed. There are one or two typos in the ...

Your description in the first paragraph is fantastic! :D I loved the: - He looked upon the road as it dipped, swelled, bounded over countless bridges and sidled the mighty ...

The Garden Of Life Greed is like a thistle, Its flowers hold much beauty, As they stand on thorny stems. Hate is like a nettle, You cannot clasp it in ...

I think that the first letter in each line should be a capital letter - but this is only insignificant nit -picking. :wink: I enjoyed it ! It was really ...

Hey to the Newbie!! :) A nice, quick, flowing short story. However I felt it lacked emotion at times and a bit more description wouldn't have done it any harm ...

This is rather hard to read!

:D I seriously liked it!! I would love to hear it sung!! :P There is nothing much to nit-pick about - It's really good. :wink: My favourite part was: fifteen ...

Fear Heartbeat, running Fleeing from a fear I Cannot see Silence which sears my Terrified soul Darkness which blinds me Clouding my mind. A piercing scream, Shiver from a nonexistent ...

Real deep! :P Its almost as if you are undergoing a bitter battle within yourself and this is so....... * lost for words* Really nice. Loved - Accept this humble ...

:lol: He he he :lol: Funny!! I liked it (except for the "Can be solved with a pill if taken soon enough" part which is dark and may upset some ...

I liked it! It was really sad though :cry: . Just a question - was it his mother that is speaking in the second half of the piece? :-k Maybe ...