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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Coward

    Great thoughts! Really intelligent, thoughtful stuff here. I must point out, though, that "opinions" is spelled with only one P. But the content here was very good. Thanks for posting ...

    Jul 10, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Kurt

    Kurt met himself when he was three years old. He didn’t know it at the time, but not because he wouldn’t have understood. In fact, it may have been a ...

    Jul 10, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Human Clay

    Very good. Very interesting. I have only one correction which I'll get out of the way, and then go on to praise. In the first stanza, you spelled "lightning" as ...

    Jul 10, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Fallen

    Very good. Perfect grammar, interesting rhyme scheme. I had trouble with the meter at first, but as it went along I really liked it. An interesting story, too... I didn't ...

    Jul 10, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Changing World

    As has been noted, your opening sentence was killer. Brilliant, genius, whatever you want to call it... I loved it. However, I agree that "day" should be changed. Not quite ...

    Jul 10, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Flat World

    Part 1 Imagine the world, so round and so large, With oceans that harbor the whale and the barge, That licks upon land, miles wide, I am told, With mountains ...

    Jul 10, 2011


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