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Re: Coward
Great thoughts! Really intelligent, thoughtful stuff here. I must point out, though, that "opinions" is spelled with only one P. But the content here was very good. Thanks for posting ...
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Re: Kurt
Kurt met himself when he was three years old. He didn’t know it at the time, but not because he wouldn’t have understood. In fact, it may have been a ...
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Re: Human Clay
Very good. Very interesting. I have only one correction which I'll get out of the way, and then go on to praise. In the first stanza, you spelled "lightning" as ...
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Re: Fallen
Very good. Perfect grammar, interesting rhyme scheme. I had trouble with the meter at first, but as it went along I really liked it. An interesting story, too... I didn't ...
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Re: Changing World
As has been noted, your opening sentence was killer. Brilliant, genius, whatever you want to call it... I loved it. However, I agree that "day" should be changed. Not quite ...
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Re: Flat World
Part 1 Imagine the world, so round and so large, With oceans that harbor the whale and the barge, That licks upon land, miles wide, I am told, With mountains ...
Jul 10, 2011
