TripleTravelTales

Thanks! I'll start it ASAP! I can't wait! I'll definitly send you my creation with this wonderful idea on my head! I guess I better start typing this excitment in. ...

Thanks Scarlett! Great encouragement! :roll: Then next parts woun't be as packed with info though. it will be more light and easier to read. I suppose you didn't really like ...

hey Alle! TripTrav here! I like the story you'll be starting. Can't wait for the nest part. Use the spell chack though. i caught a few mistakes. It will be ...

Hey! This is great! Were's #8? Wish I could do such a great work! There was a few problems though: I nodded and rolled the ball, thinking that they were ...

That was wonderful! I could see a story in the song. I sang it out loud to my friends and they loved it too! Keep up the great songs!

Thanks! tmasia! :) Do you have any critisizem though? Other people did on my first and second part. But you're the only one who's commented on this one, and you ...

Hey Kaedee! O.K. I thought it was explained in the begining. :?: Well the girl who is talking for Italy most of the time is Jasmine. The girl whose talking ...

It's wonderful. I think you should write a sequel or something. Maybe have him still be alive!

Where's the next Chapter? I love this format! The chapters aren't indefinitly long, but just right! keep it up!

I loved this a lot! I was really into the story! The whole intire time I felt like I was the girl in the story!

Thanks! I guess your right! BUT, there is one problem, one girl is practically talking the whole time in the first part! And the other IS talking al most the ...

O.K! I cut a lot of it off. I hope you can review better now! :) I'll re name this to so that it doesn't say chap 1, but Part ...

Thanks! I thought people liked LONG stories! Guess no over 5,000 words. I was sort of in a rush and just put it out there. I'll break it up now! ...

For Part 3 how about III (Roman Numerals? Or use a cool font!