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This was great for a first poem. At times, the rhymes seemed a little forced, and it interrupted the flow of syllables. Such as: I embrace you one last time, ...

It really is a wonderful day! Only a few errors here and there: Mothers day Is a wonderful day and the best day of the year "day" should be capitalized. ...

The raging storm in her eyes And the way that she carries herself Tells me that we're different In every shape, form, and fashion. I am soldier, fighting only for ...

You wrote a very nice informative article. The only thing you could add would be a conclusion! Other than that, it was great. I've never owned a dog, so reading ...

Dear World, Are you sick? Does it amuse you, Watching me scramble around Trying to determine What kind of day you've thrown at me? Are you being merciful today? Or ...

I go to a church where the Christians are very tolerant of the different aspects of media, and our group has talked about Landover Baptist Church's comments on Harry Potter. ...

Sassykat pointed out most of the *very few* errors. This is so sweet- your dad and his fiance will definitely love this, since I do! With whom is you spend ...