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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Two Friends, Two Lives, One Secret

    that sounds hekka like you and jazz. is it??

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Historical Fiction

    WOW siri. that was good. what did Mrs. Pantages give you for that one??

    Apr 9, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: It's Were All The Drama Is chapter 2

    Chapter 2 Throughout the entire summer my main focus was talking with the teachers at the neighborhood school and getting to know the kids. As it turns out I was ...

    Apr 9, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: It's Were All The Drama Is chapter 2

    Chapter 2 Throughout the entire summer my main focus was talking with the teachers at the neighborhood school and getting to know the kids. As it turns out I was ...

    Apr 9, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Earthmovers

    Kylan, i think its all right. at some points i lost what you were trying to say but at others, i completely got it. i really cannot say anything because ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Reality

    The booming and banging of that horrible night, The loud and disturbing noises gave me such a fright Why mommy, why daddy? Why do you have to fight? I’m hiding ...

    Mar 15, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Kingdom is Departed [1]

    Amazing! that was freaking awesome. i totally felt like i was there, watching shadow, and the room around her. I'm still in shock! my friend (robin likes to write) told ...

    Mar 15, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: It'll Be Okay

    Great job! I truly enjoyed your poem(though I didn't completely understand it) You seem to be a very emotional writer. What i mean by that is you make me feel ...

    Mar 15, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Liar, Thief

    okay. i sense this poem is a little dark, but you really conveyed to me that you were the character. i felt sympathy twords your charactor. Very nice job!

    Mar 15, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A nice winter swim

    A nice winter swim.The snow has just fallen, So fluffy, so nice. I go take a walk, I fall through the ice. Its cold and untelling, Not reavelling at all. ...

    Mar 15, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Getting it

    I don’t get it. :?: We are sent to this earth for a reason right? What is our purpose here? I don’t understand. :?: Why are we born in such ...

    Mar 15, 2009


Colorless green ideas sleep furiously.
— Noam Chomsky