Trikky

I don't really see how this is fantasy, but it's interesting. Here's a few nitpicks: The monster balled his hand into a bullet and got ready to aim. I think ...

Is this for a class assignment? Because you might know that there already is a book about the Holocaust by someone who actually lived through it (Diaries of Anne Frank). ...

Nice beginning. It's hard to say much about it so far, because there's so little to talk about. One thing I'm wondering though: how does Xavier know two years have ...

Wow, great twist at the end! I love the idea and the way you carried it out, but Ben's dialogue is completely unbelievable. “Girls are complicated creatures, my love. There ...

The narrative voice is a little shaky, but overall I like the theme and the idea of it. It is strange that the things we remember from our childhood are ...

PSYCHOLOGIST. That should help with your lysdexia. About the story, it was a pretty funny twist at the end, but why did the psychologist say she was a time-traveler and ...