Trikky

I was surprised to see so many homeschooled kids on here! ((so that's why some of you have so many points. jk xD )) Anyway, I've been in public school ...

Ewww. I never liked it much, maybe just because we read it in school, but I could never believe anything his characters did. They just seemed like they were out ...

Wow, what a personal piece... I'd feel a bit bad critiquing it! However, I really don't understand what the problem was with the girl. Was ADHD the learning disability? Or ...

As the Joker said, "If you're any good at anything, you don't do it for free." I think that applies here. :3

"Let sex (the body and the physical world) in." "Write every day" "Never, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, give up."

Just don't care so much! If it sucks, so what? It's not the end of the world. I know you have high expectations for yourself, but repeat the mantra, "I ...

I wouldn't worry about losing motivation for archetecture too much. You've probably heard this a thousand times, but you're fifteen and you've got a lot of time to change what ...

It's a not a bad poem, especially not for a first try. Yes-- you get the old English wrong-- thou should be thine, in the way you're using it here, ...

There were quite a few mistakes, and I like to have my own little blood sport picking them out if you don't mind >:D marble complex --> marble complexion made ...

Chill poem. How does the rest of this line go? a bait . It looks like it was cut off in the middle. There were a few grammar mistakes, but ...

Battle Royale?

It seems like so much of literature for teens is really shallow *glares at Clique and Gossip Girl novels*. Either that or deep and thick to the point of being ...

Ah! I just read it in December and it was AMAZING! I found the aliens not quite as philosophical as Slaughterhouse 5's Trafalmadorians, but they were still pretty cool, with ...

Just say no.

... and with strange aeons even death may die. Hehe, just thought I'd open up a forum to discuss the Cthulhu Mythos. ^^ But first, has anyone else here read ...