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Re: Fool's Duel: Contrition
Foreword: The War of the Four Kingdoms of Bankshire left the land in utter ruins and decimated three of the four races. The Men were the strongest in numbers and ...
Sep 25, 2006 -
Re: Fools' Duel: Curiosity Killed The Cats
Ooooh, quite ominous. I feel for the two, but it's another one of those lessons I suppose. They were both dark haired. Robin was two years older and Poppy had ...
Sep 25, 2006 -
Re: Character Answer Game
"A delicious coq au vin served on a bed of pilaf. A red wine should complement that nicely." --Seigneur Theodore Linus. "Trout. It just so happens, I ran into a ...
Sep 25, 2006 -
Re: Oracle's Possession
Nice and flowing. Cryptic, yet informative. Nice job. One suggestion: The woman had no need of a microphone to project her clear voice. I don't know if I like the ...
Sep 24, 2006 -
Re: The Blessed CH 2
NEGOTIATIONS “Words are our friend and our enemy.” “These words are quite dull. It’s difficult for me to read them properly,” Representative Arthur Darius admitted to his counterpart, Repres
Sep 23, 2006 -
Re: You learn something new every day
Harry Houdini was from Wisconsin.
Sep 13, 2006 -
Re: Do you get attatched to your characters?
I think it has to be heart-wrenching for the author in order for it to be heart-wrenching for the reader. Otherwise the writing would be detached and cold.
Sep 13, 2006 -
Re: Keeping The Green
I would say the transition is quite both actually. It took me a couple times of going back a few paragraphs to realize she had become queen. But that could ...
Sep 13, 2006 -
Re: Dragon's Song
This is for the Fantasy Fools' Contest thingy. I'm not sure if I'm supposed to put anything in the title to show that. The theme is dragons. Traveling to the ...
Sep 13, 2006 -
Re: Character Answer Game
"Spring. It's when the earth blooms up after the cold, and is once again filled with life." --Queen Mother Amelia "Anything but a hot summer in Trydia. I'd rather face ...
Sep 12, 2006 -
Re: Serum
Your poem definitely exudes some surrealism. I find it quite odd-sounding, but that is indeed the nature of surrealist work. I'm not sure what else exactly to say about it. ...
Sep 12, 2006 -
Re: Character Answer Game
"Power." --Tiberius Ghar "A nice hot bath." --Lady Jayce "Knowledge." --Peytor "Vengeance." --Marion Have you ever played in the snow?
Sep 12, 2006 -
Re: do you have any siblings?
One older brother, one older sister, one younger brother, and two younger sisters. A family of six kids! I see there are some others out there with similar situations. I'm ...
Sep 11, 2006 -
Re: Friend
Dearest friend, Your life isn’t worthless. You have all the worth, Of one that I respect. Without you, Who would I laugh with? Who would I cry with? I have ...
Sep 11, 2006 -
Re: Character Answer Game
Steal it, of course. Not that anyone would notice anyway. --Marion What it your favorite kind of shoe?
Sep 11, 2006
