Trident

Well, if they're in the public domain (earlier than 1923) than they're free game. You can post them. After that... well, I think it depends. The best way to go ...

"Keep your composure. That is vital." --Queen Mother Amelia "I don't get scared-- well, mostly." --Marion Is there an afterlife?

Meh, I don't know. The concept seems a bit... meh. I think I would have to see the way in which the power was used before I could make my ...

[This is an excerpt from a character chapter from my work in progress (novel). I tried to make it not too long and hopefully you'll find it easily understandable. Don't ...

I normally don't comment on poetry, but I felt that this poem was particularily well done. It looks like it's been dug up from a while back, so I hope ...

Ooh, I've read Holly Lisle's webpage. There's some good advice on there.

Part III He was walking the corridors of the prison. He had on shoes-- he couldn’t remember the last time he had worn shoes. They scraped against the stone floor. ...

Well done, your work flows very well. The ending was maybe a bit predictable in that he passed out. It just seems a bit cliche. Nonetheless, it was well executed. ...

Yeah, you know what? I'm going to change it back. I liked that line too much to change it. It sort of mocks those who think their life is so ...

Well the words are inspirational, and it sounds good. But the word "playdough" is kind of contradictory in this style. It's almost as if it's too silly of a word ...

Welcome HandofFate. Hopefully no one would confuse you for a girl with the male symbol on the left there. Take a look around and have some fun. Most importantly, improve ...

My apologies, RR, I read the info wrong that I had. They kill and often eat the cubs of other male lions, as Sureal said. Nevertheless, you don't often find ...

Okay, pivot, I'm going to say this is markedly improved from your last piece, whcih really made no sense. I actually see a story this time, so I applaud you ...

I apologize if I came across as... well a bully or a jerk lillizard. Perhaps sarcasm is not the best way to go. Nonetheless, my opinions stand. The first line ...

I like the premise. It was executed a bit poorly for me. In the first paragraph you use the word "thing" twice and in the second paragraph you use "something" ...