Trident

^ 8/10 It looks like a Stargate in the background, but what the heck is up with that other stuff? By the way, I just happen to LOVE Stargate.

"No, but I could go for a double scotch, and quick!" --Colonel Kiran Raiz "There's nothing better than a bowl of Terrantan pudding. Mmmm." --Lady Jayce What is your favorite ...

I suppose that's true. Some people never learn, I suppose. Putin has to be losing credibility with the Western world.

Ochen plo'ho. It seems the Russian government is still stuck in the Cold War, only they're killing their own now.

It's that darn birthday bash story. ;) Post after post after post... after... post...

Vampirewolf, they stand for "Chapter".

Well, small skirmishes normally do nothing but rack up casualties. That's why the Seigneur wanted them to finally end the small, useless battles by taking the city. And by the ...

All right, Incan, I finished reading the rest of the chapters. This last one seemed a bit long. I'm liking the way the story is progressing, except I feel like ...

Okay, this is basically my first attempt at poetry. If it's bad, please tell me. If there is something I can fix, please tell me. A flake of impure white ...

I agree with xanthan gum, there is something a bit off in this chapter. There are some parts I found to be rambling, and others were intriguing. This chapter is ...

"I often hide in dark corners and in small niches. Of course, standing is often necessary." --Marion "Standing in front of the High Council, relentlessly beating the members with my ...

This is moving along nicely. I've noticed this is very character driven. I'm not saying that's bad thing at all. It is what works for you. There is a plot ...

Incan, I can't believe you think you can't write fiction. Sigh... This is good. You have a talent for playing with the reader's emotions. Your characters are growing more real ...

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Wow, Eleanor Rigby, I love how you give me two reassuring links. One to the Museum of Hoaxes, which I believe to be good site, but likely proves that whatever ...