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I think any sane, rational-thinking scientist would argue that homosexuality is determined biologically, and therefore is natural in that sense. The thing is, we're not all sane, rational-thinking sci

Hey Kylan! It's been a long time. Anyway, here's my take, though I'm afraid I'm keeping this a bit brief. I was going to comment first on your POV in ...

Hi Bickazer, hopefully I can give you something to help with your style. I tend to stay away from grammar stuff anyway as I figure the author can do this ...

Hi Jon, it's really been quite a while since I've done a proper critique, so we'll see how this goes. I hope you'll value my advice. The sky was brimming ...

Hi fantasyfreak14, Though I think the topic of marriage you have chosen to address is worthy, it is quite a task, maybe one that you should think about avoiding. While ...

Nice.

Does it have anything to do with evaporation? Like the smaller puddles will be more likely to go into the air and you'll breathe them?

I change my password for school every six months or something, so I get all confused because I often use that password for everything and then some of them don't ...

Yeah, it is depressing, but really I think it's true.

Muahaha! I got an interview with her for my school blog: Leave a comment or two!

Hi afterthought, I would start off saying that your first line is gorgeous. Get rid of "Where to begin?" I like the extended metaphor that you have in the first ...

I was really confused by this at first. I thought Heather might have been trying to test the greeters or something. ^_^

You could also try writing about something else. Like a diary or short story or an essay if you're into that. Basically to get yourself in the mindset of writing. ...

Nice work!

Hi kissthewitch. Your name reminds me of a QOTSA song called "Burn the Witch", but I guess it's the exact opposite in this case. XD I thought the beginning line ...