Trident

I liked this gyr. It was well written, surely, and the plot develops nicely with all the nice small mysteries that you will solve for us later. That keeps me ...

Part I It was the jazz that soothed her, that kept her from tearing her eyes from her head. It was the tinny sigh of the ride cymbal, the loose ...

The group began to move. The food sat in their stomachs, heavy, but it would give them the necessary energy to get of the caves. Tan’quin marched in with the ...

I got around to reading the first two chapters, Brad, but I don't have time to crit them. Sorry. I'll try to do that when I have more time.

Busy with the holidays. Won't be able to post for a short while. Sorry.

Happy b-day! Welcome to the legal adult club. It's not as fun as it might seem. ;)

Hehe, well... Tan'quin is agile, so I should probably join that party. Plus Adrian has a wound, so he'd be slow. I think it best to split them evenly So.. ...

“I’m not going into the mountains,” Tan’quin said. “Besides, it seems the dwarf has already decided who he wants.” Besides, Tan’quin thought, he was not too familiar with mountains. They

Luna, I found this well done. Extremely original. I recently read a science fiction story that was so different from anything else, it was so fresh. And then you come ...

Hey aero, I hope this helps. :D Mud flew everywhere as he dove into the black pit of goo behind the famed apple tree that made up his imaginary war ...

After Ursa’s delicious venison dinner, the group decided to move out. It was early, to be sure; the darkness still shrouded all. Valin’s eyes adjusted to the right level, and ...

Yay for bubbles! All those poetry crits really paid off!

Okay, I set up some action. I was thinking that this would not be an attack by Hooper's men, but something else that Hooper and his men would fight alongside ...

As Tan’quin gathered brush for his bed, he noticed Hooper and his men had separated themselves from the rest of the group. There was something odd about them, something he ...

Well, there could still be a common enemy, but then the group cpuld be betrayed at the last moment, when they are the most vulnerable (ie when they are fighting ...