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Welcome Taiven. This a great little corner of the Internet. I hope we can help you improve your writing and vice versa. Trident

Hi Chester, I would suggest the Other Fiction section. We typically don't get too much horror in here. It might be a good idea to label it as such also. ...

[Hi all. I do plan to make this story a LOT longer. Perhaps a novella or something of the sort, but here's a short excerpt that I hope you enjoy, ...

>.< I personally believe the fact that the spoons didn't melt is the best evidence.

Aloe

Narcissus

Have you tried any kind of soap? One thing that worked for me when I got some unknown grime on my books was markerboard marker cleaner. I would be careful ...

Airplane. Tower. Screams and police sirens.

she is considered too " depressing to waste your breath on ". I got in an argument once about whether or not she is good because she was 'stupid' enough ...

Harmless, really; this small object that merely sat on her desk and waited for her return; waited for her to put her warm fingers around it and place it upon ...

Hey Sureal. Since much of the piece is in short sentences, this line is meant to convey the confusion of the narrator looking for Mary as she is running away. ...

Ah, many thanks, Kit. My ego certainly needed that stroking. As for your suggestions, I shall take them into the deepest of consideration. They are good advice. And I'm wholly ...

Where a paragraph starts or ends doesn't really make a difference except for a few occasions. The following are necessities: --To separate two or more peoples' dialogue. --To separate ideas ...

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