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I'm sure those that were directly affected may take some extra time off, but for the rest of the campus, it's probably best just to move on.

Yes, very sad. I hope the families will somehow be able to cope with this tragedy. I suppose it's probably the deadliest school shooting to date. It's a shame these ...

Definitely not. I think I would be too controlling of the story and want to do everything my way. And that's not necessarily a bad thing. I never saw the ...

Brave New World by Aldous Huxley. So far, rather creepy, but interesting. Not too difficult to get through. I finally finished Catch-22 which was superb. And Sam, I think some ...

Seems like a step down in the evolutionary process if you look at that picture... But hey, birds are cool too. They have some awesome relatives.

Lol, I didn't expect Wisconsin to be in the top ten. I might have something to do with that. ^_^

Hi Pros, a few comments here. I'm going to be rather harsh too since this piece has room for lots of improvement. To me the story was kind of dull. ...

You could always do a time lapse by pretty much cutting out the travel scene and find another way to establish characterization. If you wanted to go the travelling route, ...

Hi Crysi. A few comments here. I liked the character and the idea a lot. It was certainly something new. Janvian's reactions were very revealing of his character. I think ...

Don't love them or hate them too much. Then you might not be able to do what is necessary to them to get the story to work. Personally, I would ...

All right, short update. I have two pieces out there that may or may not sell. I'm reluctant, but it's always possible. Arbiters went out to the Magazine of Fantasy ...

We're talking about wallpaper and suddenly you say something about churches and insecurities. And then bells. And suddenly back to wallpaper. Well the fact that we're talking about wallpaper and ...

A lot of people may find little exercises like these helpful, and if you do, then I suggest you pursue them. Personally, for me, they are a distraction from the ...

For class: The Tempest by William Shakespeare For leisure: Catch-22 by Joseph Heller Which by the way is turning out to be one of my favorite books ever. I've read ...

I can't say I've ever heard of it before. Can you give some sort of explanation as to what your impressions of it are?