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This was a pleasant piece of writing. I'd very much agree with Sam's comments over sentence structure. Play around with it a bit. And I noticed a few adverbs/adjectives and ...

Lol, yes, I think you know now how actually involved all that copying and pasting is. ^_^ Thanks a ton for doing that. An IOU is in order, I think.

Many thanks for the comments, Jig. I'll get around to your combined story in the near future.

Hey Aero!

[This is not yet complete. I do plan to finish it, so please feel free to comment.] The four sat in opposite corners, never quite knowing how exactly they had ...

The crit is certainly appreciated, and no worries about any harshness that may come of it. I like to think I can handle it. ;) And returning the favor is ...

Hi theronguard. When I read this piece, my first thought wasn't very good. You have action, okay, but it is the cheapest type of action you can have. It screams ...

Sorry to conflict with everyone else, but I wasn't a huge fan. There's a lot of thriller type writing out there and so you need to find a way to ...

Ha. I pretty much disagree with you completely Brad. I thought was an interesting way to end the season. The show likes to play on your mind and I have ...

Sorry I haven't been updating these threads. I'll get around to it sometime. And Kaz, I think you have the mod power to do so, so if you ever had ...

I didn't stereotype all Christians... I am one myself. I am not saying that in today's society it is about race. I'm saying that those who viciously go out and ...

The issue has nothing to do with race, it has everything to do with faith. People of all colors and classes believe in Jesus. Don't try to jam odd shaped ...

Yeah but... race is a new concept that has only been around for a couple of centuries. Which was when the majority of such conversions were in the process of ...

Here's my view on conversions and the such, however demented it may seem: Don't try to convert people. That is mostly a waste of time, and rather, I think, the ...

Genius. I mean, at first, when I hadn't really been big into reading so-called 'literature', I was like, "What's the big deal?" But then I was immersed in its intricacies ...