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Trident: Be thankful that you are allowed to have orderly, well-mannered ideas! You're so lucky! Lol, not so much orderly as erratically present. I've only begun to work on specifics ...

I've got a plot, I've got a plot, I've got a plot, hey hey hey hey.

That's great! Did they give any particular reason that it was selected? I'd love to know!

You can try showing how the character enjoys causing pain. Emphasize his glee at hurting them. See, I don't know if that's such a good idea. I don't think there's ...

Hey Clau, I agree with Sam, it's going to be difficult. Hate: okay, we have this enigma that probably very few of us have ever truly felt. Certainly we've perhaps ...

Welcome Ashgan. YWS is a superb place for honing your writing skills. So don't be afraid to post what little writing you do. Your view on hip hop is inciteful ...

Here's six. Unanticipated, the evening rain fell in dense curtains, creating puddles in the roads, rippling to watery pentameters, always moving. Always dancing. Streetlights glowed like beacons in th

Once again, my apologies for this taking so long. Cigarette smoke leaked [s]out of[/s] from the small bar - [s]blazing with[/s] neon lights blazing and beer conglomerates in the hazy ...

[This is for a class, so any feedback is appreciated.] My mother hoards our confessions and locks them behind steel-plated doors. She stashes them in pink piggy banks like the ...

Welcome Kate. It's certainly a good site for those who want to improve their writing.

You get to start the new category, iQuippie!

Food dishes with 'cheese' in their name: 1. Cheeseburger 2. Macaroni and Cheese 3. Cheesecake 4. Cauliflower Cheese 5. broccoli and cheese 6. Grilled Cheese 7. Ham and cheese sandwich ...

All right, Jiggity. Here we go. The first two paragraphs were kind of boring. All exposition and the like, and I think I'd like to see more action going on, ...

Mrs. Tammy Johnson deposited a penny in a cleaned-out jam jar every time she sinned. If she happened to catch herself in a lie or curse her husband in anger, ...

I promise to take a look soon. Can't do it right now, though...