Trident

Me like breathe.

You know that a comma is the difference between life and death. You know that WCW has nothing to do with professional wrestling, but stands for William Carlos Williams. You ...

I also thought to get rid of the "Do you?" and that the title needed to be amended. This was superb and I usually don't leave short comments like this, ...

Can we please lock this thread? It's from 2006 and I keep getting confused when it's brought back up. Thanks.

Yay! A close victory to be sure. It was a badly played game. Turnover-rich. And yay for the Packers being your second favorite team!

*Sigh* So which refs did you guys pay off? XD Should have had a touchdown there.

I can already see the featuredness on blogtalkradio's home page. :D

End of game prediction: Packers 28 Redskins 21 It'll probably be way off. XD

Actually, if you look at most maps in fantasy books, the authors had someone else draw it for them. I don't think it will be a problem. As for submitting ...

Sure! It's a near rhyme, so you'll not find too many problems with it. It might even make a poem not sound too forced.

Go Packers! They're going to beat your Redskins. ^_^

I like it better. ^_^ There are a few things that could be trimmed. Redundant phrases and the like. But overall, it's a fascinating story.

At first I thought this was a dream, which is...probably not good since that means it wasn't altogether realistic. There were some parts that led me to that opinion, and ...

I love it! I think the text font is perfect too.

Hey alleycat. Here's the critique you earned from the contest. ^_^ Firstly, I would do away with the pitter-patter unless you could find some way to fit it into your ...