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I wish for CCF to crit the following story by Sam: Yay! Thanks CCF! (I just sent the same message through the donation option.)

To me this felt like a jingle that someone might whistle or sing. Not exactly what you want to have for your poetry. I'd say if you want to keeping ...

Lo, Sam! The Beggarboy section was quite well done. The imagery there was vivid and I could see everything happening. The whole idea of the clothes coming down the river ...

Mary lies smiling on the blacktop, finding faces in the cumulous clouds. Around her lie her friends, who scream in protest at injustice, inequality. A crowd of picketers is corralled ...

Tell us the truth, it was the Cylons wasn't it? Glad you're back.

Welcome! YWS is definitely the place to better your writing. Do you write any specific genre? Prefer poetry or prose?

Hi Heather, welcome to the site. You'll find it a nice environment for receiving constructive criticism. We tend to be harsh when it's necessary and giving praise when it's deserved. ...

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Two portfolios: one finished, one unstarted. A presentation that I just gave today. A Russian final on Wednesday and a Modern English Grammars final next Monday. Should be loads of ...

Try to remember that they must be yes or no questions. Have they released an album within the last year?

Animals everyone is afraid of: 1. Rats 2. Snakes 3. Spiders 4. Pitbulls 5. Crocodiles 6. Scorpians 7. Humans 8. Lions 9. Piranas 10. Centipedes

2. Are they originally from the UK?

Do they consist of more than three members?

Many thanks for that site, Kit. I never understood the reasoning behind the poor man's copyright anyway.

Nope. Russell Crowe. You take the next one, Cpt.