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Well it's about five below here right now, but no day off.

Welcome! YWS is great fun, yes. Feel free to peruse the poetry forums and post your work. Don't forget to critique as well.

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Marvelous! The images were whimsical and wonderful. I believe it is meaningful, unlike what was commented on before. I would not like a world in which poetry must have clear-cut ...

I say go for it. I think any fiction author would tell you the same.

Hey Sam! For some reason, I read this a few days ago, but had to get offline, so here's a few thoughts. "A particularly disturbing person" -- I'd say get ...

Hey Arion, welcome to YWS. There's definitely some good writing here. However, I would say that there are a few things you might want to take a closer look at. ...

Imagery- Your imagery is nice here, but like Suz said, maybe less visual imagery would serve you well. I would also cut down on "poetic tongue" and "lyric taste-buds". While ...

Soon those who are posting will run out of points, or things to post, and will start critiquing and eventually the things to critique will run out and YWS will ...

It was good knowing you, twit...

I think the main thing I would do with this is to be less abstract and actually explain what is going on the scene. As it is, I have no ...

Hi Kimberly, There are some interesting sounds in here and I like the way you have experimented with sound. I suggest using punctuation in your poem as it is a ...

Essays, huh? Interesting. Well, to each his (or her ;)) own. I think I've written one too many of those things in my day. There is a Non-fiction section, so ...

This is a nice poem to give to a family member. It's sort of sweet and I'm sure your brother would appreciate it if you were to give it to ...

Ha. I had to look at this topic after I saw the title. I don't think you're a poopy head, Suz.