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Welcome! And thanks for the critique on my short story. ^_^ YWS is a great place and I think you can only benefit from being here. As for your sister...well ...

Hey Suz, I think you're heading toward what prominent scholars have debated for decades. There are several fields of literary theory and criticism and the one you describe most resembles ...

Um, this is absolute awesomeness. I'm freaking excited.

Hey, thanks everyone for the crits. For those who may be struggling with the message/moral: a lot of literature in today's world tends to present a choice to the characters ...

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0_0 Best of luck, Jack! School is quite an experience.

One question: will there be a minumum of posts that you must have before giving out stars? I can easily see some people creating accounts just to rate their own ...

I know that I just finished my entry for today, but I just wanted to add that Dad came home this afternoon completely drunk. I don’t know how he can ...

I think that I’m in love. Crap! Now that I finally put that onto paper it sounds so freaking cheesy! But still – I really believe it. I actually really ...

All right, first piece. There was a series of events that led to Lord Isaac’s downfall which I believe are of the greatest importance. You have a tense change right ...

I forget what else I looked at on the other pages, haha. Tri: for a moment you looked like someone I know. But I don't know you, so obviously it ...

A couple of pics from school... The serious pic. I'm with my roommate from last year who I'm good friends with. And here's awww pic. That's my friend's girlfriend.

I like some of the description here. The language is nice and seemingly sounded out. I think the poem's biggest problem is that it is merely a list of things ...