Trident

Hey everyone who posted in the Dramatic Poetry section: Your threads are now in the newly created subforum under NaNoWriMo. So if you're confused as to where it went, there ...

Should we move the already created ones in dramatic poetry over to the subforum? I think this sounds like a lot of fun as well.

Hey Suz, I don't quite understand the reasoning behind such an idea... 2. 3, 4, and 8 are really helping verbs, so they aren't really the main verbs of the ...

I think only Britons can decide whether this is for them or not. And also, it seems to me that a pledge to the Queen is quite different than a ...

The best foods in the world: 1. Ice Cream 2. Pizza 3. Biscuits and gravy

Hehe, well I've got two, if you don't mind and they're both chocked full of dialogue. Here they are:

Well we get a lot of snow in northern Wisconsin, so it's not that unusual to get a couple of feet during a bad snowstorm. That picture looks facetious, though. ...

Hi kittykat. Your story seems to lack any conflict, which is really what helps make a story exciting. There seems to be a little, but nothing too big. I would ...

This is an interesting poem. There were parts I enjoyed, but others seemed to drag it down. Kindling, Piled high upon yesterday's ashes Gathered, clustered. Within the boundaries of stone ...

Hi jenni. I'd first like to say that you have a nice idea here, but it has been done before. So what you need to do is make the idea ...

Don't worry. ^_^ It was only ever meant to be a stand alone story. I think some people are just confused by the ending, as they're not used to reading ...

“Come on, baby, no delays. We gotta get out of here real quick!” Diego stood in place in the doorway; a pale-faced girl was sitting on the end of a ...

^_^ I think "ploo" is my favorite part.

You probably had a trial period of Microsoft Word that expired, so you'll have to buy the software, which can be expensive. If you own the software, then type "find ...

I read this in the advanced critiques section, but didn't leave any feedback. I'll try to here. ^_^ The underlined sentence: cut it, or alter it. Curls falling is a ...