Trident

Then I wondered if you meant it to be ambiguously both. You're more in the right direction with this thought. ;)

April 2 I liked the originality of the topic. I thought it was sort of prosy, but that's perfectly fine. My poems are sort of similar. The term "fast food ...

Hey Penguin. April 3 You have great images here. I personally liked your mentions of color. Mixed with the water imagery, there was a sort of magical effect. There are ...

April 3 I liked the line breaks you have here. They seem to work to help convey the feeling of falling. I really suggest cutting down on words such as ...

April 3 "I am no woman weathervane" Cal, omg, that is superb! I thought this was so original. "to point my nose north" Haha, great line. Love the double meaning ...

April 3 I was impressed with this one. The imagery was lovely. I really loved the last four lines. And the two before them. The only part I wasn't so ...

Hi there. :D April 3 I liked the song-like quality of the poem. It's about a guitar and keeps with that image with the way you make it like a ...

April 3 This was great, Jack. The second stanza was my favorite, I think. I wasn't so sure about the third stanza. I can see its meaning as to be ...

April 2 I liked what you were trying to do with the poem, but it could be put a bit more articulately? That last line was lovely. April 3 Very ...

April 3 Very nice imagery. I suppose the only thing that seemed out of place was the image of the rifle shells. It seems to take the poem in a ...

Ha, ha! Still got it in a half hour before midnight. Tis still April 3. April 3 The old man sits at the end of the dock: an ancient thing, ...

April 2 Bacchanalia Whisk out your whiskey, let’s hop to your scotch. Don’t whine about wine: no time for such crime. There’s no shame in Chablis and no grapple with ...

I wasn't a huge fan of April 1, though it was sort of a nice little ditty. April 2 I thought was better. I would shy away from putting some ...

I rather liked the first and last lines. They were sort of like, "whoa". In between gets a bit fuzzy and I really think expanding what you have to include ...

Er, hopefully I'll be able to keep up with this. Poems are much shorter, of course, so I think I can take a little time to write one each day. ...