Trident

I think my favorite line was "That you would lay that first kiss upon my cheek, or better yet, my [s]own[/s] mouth" I would also work off the "you have ...

I wouldn't say it's your best for sure. There are a few good lines, but it also seems like you stray a bit stylistically. I would drop the the words ...

I've got some more people, but I could use a few more. It really is fun and takes hardly any time. I'd love to get a practice round in. I'll ...

Sounds good. It really is a fun little game. I would love to start it before the end of August so we could get a monthly point total going.

I was just curious if anyone was interested in a little email game I came across called Six Questions. It's a little bit like the game Scattergories if you've ever ...

Really cool! ^_^ Very impressive how YWS is shown.

Banned for violence against apples.

Do the cylon's eyes still go zoom , zoom , zoom , back and forth? Cos that was always cool. Yes, the centurions' do. Plus the raiders. BSG, obviously. I ...

Wow, Via, that's really quite a confession. It's a terrible thing to have happened. I'm glad that you feel comfortable enough to share it with us, and really, getting it ...

April 5 Sorry, but I wasn't really much of a fan of this poem as much as everyone else. I can certainly see where you might take it, and of ...

April 7 I have enough time For one stanza only, So thus may it look To be a bit lonely.

Thanks Via. I tend to have prosy poems more often than not. I'm not a huge fan of making poems so complicated that they're not understandable. I used to do ...

April 6 John never stole a pie from a windowsill. Not because he wouldn’t think to do it-- he had simply never seen such a pie. And if the opportunity ...

A day late, so it was rushed, and quite terrible. April 5 I remember eating peppermints, on those winter days when I came over. Sometimes we’d stick them in our ...

April 4 Driving on a lonely stretch, I watched the blackbirds scavenge on the last few scraps of a carcass. I couldn’t tell what they had been feeding from, but ...