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Hello again! Thought I'd drop by with another review and get you out of the Green Room! This chapter has some changes that are a lot more evident. I think ...

I thought I'd drop by and give this a review, seeing as I was following the original draft of it. It's been a bit long since reading the older version ...

Hey Blues! Thought I'd take a look at your story. Hmm... there was a lot I liked about this chapter, and a lot I'm not so sure about. On the ...

Right! Reviewing time. :) I'm so glad you posted this today, because after reading the first two chapters, I was eager to know where you'd take it from there. I'll ...

Okay, so I'm finally up to date! The first thing I'm going to mention is a grammar-y thing, because it's something that really stood out in this chapter, although I ...

Hey Lefty! Happy Review Day! Okay... so I'm not sure how I feel about this chapter. I think, personally, you've had a bit too much action too close together, and ...

Heya Lefty! School has meant that it's taken me a while to get back to this, but hopefully today I'll be able to get through another chapter or two. I'm ...

Back for more! I'm suprised this story isn't getting more reviews, to be honest. Okay, first point's a negative one, and maybe a little nitpicky of me, but it's not ...

Here to review as promised! :) The bad news is that I didn't think that this was your strongest chapter writing-wise. For me, it just felt as though it was ...

Before I get into reviewing this, I'll have you know, miss, that I'm reviewing this instead of doing my maths homework. A holiday's woth of homework that I haven't so ...

I've got the reviewing bug today, so assuming my battery doesn't die, here's another review. More character relationship development here, which was great. I liked seeing how Lydia and Daniel ...

Here I am again, with one review to go until my fourth star (woot woot!), so I'll get right into it. The first thing I have to mention is the ...

Hi again! I really enjoyed ths installment. Your writing is ver strng. You've got a couple of grammar issues in the final paragraph (check the spelling a 'leach'. I think ...

Here I am again! I'm pretty surprised that this has no reviews, considering it's so early on in the story, but I guess that's the way of the novel on ...

Hullou! I noticed tht you had a few chapters that are languishing in the Green Room, so what better excuse for rescuing them than Review Day? Nothing major in terms ...