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Certain aspects of this poem are good, but I'm a little confused by a few things. A lonely street full of people. The contrast to me has little immediate effect, ...

Hey sis! I came to ask you for an ickle review please. It's my poem: Patience Please only do it if you're not too busy with rehearsals and stuff; I ...

NOT ACCEPTING/ RETIRED Heck, why not? *elder takes a dive* name: Sean / Elder age: 18 what you write: Poetry, Sci-fi shorts (currently working on my third novel, but really ...

Y'all are hating on clichés, huh? Yes, it is indeed a very overused phrase, but it seemed the only appropriate phrase with some form of meaning behind it. The first ...

It seemed so simple; to take one's place in an orderly fashion, and await attention of a clerk, at their discretion, and never question the wait, or its duration and ...

Done! Moar Reviews PLEASE!

Hi sis! *snuggloffs* A very nice, simple, clean-cut poem. Rhythmically sound, except for stanza three, where I think the last line needs a few more syllables to keep the rhythm ...

My Dear, I'm scared, terrified as much to say 'I love you' as 'I hate you'. For all my skin may crawl, and seep and set into black lacquer and ...

'Tis done, sis! *hugs back*

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Hi sis! Hope you'll forgive me, but I'm not one for quoting a whole piece and going through line by line analysis. This poem portrays a very simple lifestyle, or ...

Hi Val! Let me be the first to welcome you here to the YWS! You sound like the average gal (welcome to the club of averages), with some creativity behind ...

oo-er. Sorry Zan! xD Didn't notice your review til after the 14th edit! Been busy working on the structure, because I knew the rhythm was awfully shakey to begin with, ...

Hey sis! Lyric Poetry - The Stars It's pretty short, and to be honest, was written in 20 minutes.

The lights at night, static glimmers too far to reach for - to hold like amibitions once fought for; the values of a soul no more. Once inspiring, twice depressing; ...