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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Above the Clouds Chap 1

    I agree that fourteen year-olds can get into fights and get bloodied up a bit, but they were among family. With parents and an older brother there, I don't think ...

    Jan 23, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Freedom

    Maybe you could put in a flashback of what had happened the night before or flashbacks of the first time it happened since you hinted that this had happened to ...

    Jan 23, 2010


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