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  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Kojin

    I really like your story. I will say that when I started reading, I was a little confused. However, by the time I was done reading, everything made sense. I ...

    Nov 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: Magic, Bread, and Blood ~ 1

    I absolutely love the suspenseful ending and well as the beginning! I also like how descriptive you were. However, there is one thing that bothers me. When you say: She ...

    Nov 23, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Beginnings

    I love how you're honest and clear! I have not seen anyone express themselves like you just did. (in a good way ;) ) And I really respect that about ...

    Nov 22, 2016
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: When Summer Ends

    Wow! I did not see that ending coming! As soon as I started reading, I was hooked. You had me getting closer and closer to my computer screen until the ...

    Nov 22, 2016
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Dramatic Re: Alex

    I really like "The Void Child." It has a nice ring to it. I would also like to see more of Alex and Jamie (love the names) and would even ...

    Nov 22, 2016


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