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Re: Sudden Discomfort
Thank you very much :D I wrote this piece a while ago when I was trying to get to sleep; the idea popped into my head so I turned my ...
Mar 9, 2013 -
Re: Sudden Discomfort
Hi Dogs :D Thank you for the swift review, the compliments and improvements. A do agree with you on your improvements, where I either needed to shorten the sentence or ...
Mar 9, 2013 -
Re: Hurt
Simple yet really deep poem. I like the idea that individually we don't hurt, we all hurt together.
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: The first time
hiya, thank you for reviewing my poem :D Thank you for your kind words i put a lot of effort into the idea itself and the words that i used. ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: The first time
Thank you for reviewing my poem, its been about a year haha. Just want to apologise for the errors that were in there, my spelling isn't great. And i never ...
Feb 24, 2013
