ToxicAnglerFish

Thank you!!!

Thank you! Your criticism is fine! I wanted this poem to be more simple and ambiguous as in the detailing and I don't do rhyming poems often. Thank you though!

Thank you! This is actually a updated version of a poem I have previously posted on here around a few months ago? But thank you for the lovely compliments!

Thank you very much for your detailed and thought out review! The only correction I have to make is the first-person perspective part, I'm pretty sure my editing program must ...

Thank you!! I mainly repeated these words to put emphasis and convey the point furthur and plus since bugs are the mains subject matter I wanted to make sure they ...

Thank you very much for this review! I really appericate your thoughts and critiques you have offered me. I do agree on making more patterns in my work as I ...

Thank you very much!!

Thank you! I did the lack of cohesion and patterns on purpose to replicate the feelings of anxiety and depression as it can be unpredictable (At least for me) and ...

Thank you!! I mainly did the stuff you called out to try to keep the rhyme and flow of the poem, but thank you for the review.

Thanks!

Thank you! I really enjoyed how humorous your review was! And yeah I realized theres some sentence structure issues with grammar issues since some others pointed that out. But I'm ...

Thank you! I did want to keep this poem simple but I was thinking of expanding it a little bit :)

Thank you for the review! I really appericated it even on this small poem of mine :)

No problem :)

Thank you for all the reviews everyone! I am surprised to see how much attention this particular poem got! There are a lot of reviews and while having to type ...