TorturedArtist

Love is a malicious gift, Delicious torment, A toxic kiss. Love, from whence this poision drips, Destroys my will, My will to live. This burning pain is all I have, ...

This is a very good poem. I loved the drama and subject matter. That said, I think you should review your punctuation. Exhausting and sleepless , H ere comes the ...

This is a extremely moving poem on a really important issue. I love the metaphores that you used, but I think you should just look over the punctuation again. I ...

This is a really good poem. The repetition is very effective. Having said that, I feel that some of the stanzas don't flow very nicely. [quote="kikialicia31"]How could you? Leave me ...

dude, i haven't laughed that hard for a long time. Thanks- I really needed that.

"Kitty?" he whispers, wrapping his arms around me. I feel him dragging me back into reality, anchoring me in the present. I stay silent, letting the blade clatter to the ...

Hey... I'm new..... probably why I'm writing this :mrgreen: ..... Anyways, check out the things I post from here on out...