ToritheMonster

I'd say the best place to post this would probably be in one of the poetry forums. That way you'll get a good solid review! From a brief read, this ...

If you're super serious about this novel, most high schools will let you shadow a student for a day. Why not do that, to get a first-hand idea?

this is both an entertaining and extremely informative article/comic thingy on the proper usage of a semicolon.

I just write; even if it sounds nothing like I wanted. I don't stop until my hand is tired. You'll have something, and as you write more- even if it ...

Perhaps a person looking into a fountain and seeing the reflection of someone else staring back up? Like the fountain has another side somewhere, somehow. Or what about a skeleton ...

Really, you just have to read the book a lot. Focus specifically on that character. Take notes. What do they do that's unusual e.g. quirks or ticks? What is their ...

Your pupils automatically contract in bright light to prevent too much from entering your eye. Therefore, in a bright flash, your pupils would immediately contract a lot.

I suggest a description of the corpse. It's a clue to how they were killed and builds suspense. Then you'll break it later on in the book when the whole ...

Well, have you covered all the types of fiction? Sci-fi, horror, romance, action, adventure, fantasy, and all their sub- categories? Steampunk is fun, becoming trendy, and a good challenge. Maybe ...

I find that a whole novel in 2nd person gets frustrating to read. It's probably even more frustrating to write. I suggest, if you're going to use that POV, that ...

Picnics. We used to have them near my town's gazebo. Or rotisserie chicken Cuz we'd eat it at our picnics.

I love names! I personally always go for a meaning behind them. It is sometimes directly related to the character, sometimes the complete opposite. I suggest you check out the ...

Just being too... perfect. Like never, ever breaking a rule. Not a hair out of place. Speaks only in direct, clear, quiet phrases. Has obviously never cussed. Is incredibly respectful ...

I'd off the people who gave me the powers- revenge, sweet revenge. Once they were dead, I'd feel slightly better. Or maybe I'd go after the families of the people ...

You friendly neighborhood Jew here! In America, Jews had it almost, but not quite, as bad as people of color in the 40s. Many beaches and fancy places had a ...