ToritheMonster

Very good beginner eye! Keep in mind the red part on the edges don't curve inward. Everyone seems to make that mistake. I suggest looking up a how to draw ...

This is nice! I absolutely agree with everything you commented one, except for the font size. I think it's fine. And bigger would distract from the piece. I think the ...

Pretty thing, you're royalty. Raise your little gloved hands to the sky. They're silken- more than most can afford. Or are they just clouds? It doesn't matter, because at the ...

(I can do gross all by myself.) Observe, the common coffin Just a box for holding bones. Filled with empty promises the body lies alone. But heaven! cries the common ...

Why stop, my sweet? The night is young No rules to be obeyed. Though the paper faces grin and flash she screams at the blade. Another heart to pocket another ...

You used to call her Little Lace her face was white as snow. But the devil came and went away and that was long ago. Perhaps you're old and bitter ...

Letters are funny things so much like onions. They come in a papery skin with a soft flesh inside begging to be opened up. But don't you dare cry. They're ...

Vertigo, you devil. I told you I wanted none of your gut-wrenching favours Or your promises, fragile as the frayed rope that holds us together. Oh, you think I cannot ...

No, no, I don't fear the man in the black suit. I find his brimstone glare a comfort. His dapper ways enchant me. No, no, my love, don't shake. It ...

The little crib is trimmed with cracked velvet. And the little fists reach out of the darkness and they shake as if asking why? why? is my rattle made out ...

The bowl, once empty, is now filled with holy water Jesus, it's beautiful. What would be more pure than the tears of a virgin? Jesus, she's beautiful. And the church ...

The words are like so many so many needles over time, they burst the flesh and like needles, sew lies deep into her eardrums so sad, really. She'll never hear ...

The river is cold, but the day is long; or so thought the girl in the green as she washed the shards of shattered glass of teacups, down by the ...

This is amazing! I just suggest working on the neck/ chin area. His head is at a bit of an odd angle and there's not really any space between the ...

This is very good! As other people have said, it's kind of disproportionate under then neckline. I think it's very nice overall. It could be improved if you added some ...