ToritheMonster

Eighth- The girl sent bolt of lightning at my chest. I was blown back, I could smell my hair sizzling. My whole body tingled. I must have caught her off-guards ...

I don't know about your issue, Scar, but on the topic of the SB: So,who's going to win? Riders or Shadows? It seemed as if most people were infavor of ...

Sorry. I tried to make sure your charrie had an easy way out, but yeah. It won't happen again.

Hey! Okay, so I really liked this. Pudin and Lava caught all of my nitpicks, but I have a question. What happened to the girl in the store? Did she ...

No offense, but he looks like a fifty year old-emo-wannabe.

I'd like to, but I really need more people, especially guys.

Holy freaking bejeebus super-mega-foxy-awesome-hot. This is good, frighteningly so. Seriously. I can't even find stuff to critique. And you did this in a week? I shake you warmly by the ...

Thanks!

Name: Marvel Rhyme Age(Teenager please): 18 Appearance: Tall and red-haired with bright green eyes. He has a subtle muscular build. Picture: What do your wings look like?: They are metal, ...

I kinda just knocked her out. She can escape from the dungeons soon. DO you want her to be free of get taken captive and tortured? One is easy, one ...

Same. If you guys know anybody who'd be interested in joining, send them over!

Eighth- ((and WhiteTiger, you're fine. erm, technically, I was just confused, Bree wasn't anywhere, but everything's kosher now.)) A newcomer joined, a Rider. Storm Riders annoyed me in particular, th

EDIT: okay, I changed my post. It's now Zara vs, Manarian in the throne room, with me watching. I don't even know how Bree got sucked into that... oh well. ...

oh... can we just say that Bree got there and Zara is... hiding?And will come out whenever? Edit:all fixed. Eighth is now watching Zara fight Manarian. I dunno how Bree ...

Personally, I thought this was beautiful. It was a poem about death, but it wasn't ranting baout how much one misses the dead person, it was just.. telling. It was ...