ToritheMonster

Cute! I think you show a lot of promise for a beginner. Her eyes are very good, but as someone else said, they could use some lashes or shine or ...

Beautiful work! I want a crystal like that. I suggest just about only what other people have said: perhaps tone down the crystal, or at least the gleam. A deeper ...

Heya! Alright, this poem had several nitpick-y things in it, but I think everyone else caught those. I think overall, this is good. It tells a story, a good one. ...

Eighth- The girl was strong, incredibly so. She could prove useful, so there was no point in killing her. I scratched a cut to match mine across her face- my ...

Um... yup. Sure. I was most definitely kidding. *giggles sheepishly*

Heehee, he looks like my school's mascot. Again, I agree that the shading needs work , but other than that, it's very good. NIce work. Perhaps some color would be ...

Plupolafugus! He's so adorable! I wouldn't call him a masterpiece, but he has character. Plupolafugus. That's an adorable name. What does the message mean? My only suggestion is that you ...

Very pretty. Is her arm behind her, or is she just armless...? I love her hair, its nice, but my favorite part os her face. It's really cool-looking. I suggest ...

These are amazing! You have crazy talent. I love how some are really twisted. And you drew that eye on your backpack??? Dude. That's phenomenally cool. I want to buy ...

Okay, this is... interesting. It shows a lot of promise, but you need to edit and expand. You started of a Goddess Of? Of a goddess? What does 'of' mean? ...

Erm... to be honest, I don't really get the point of this poem. It seems to have some deeper meaning, but we can only guess at what that that is. ...

Kryptonite can be easily found. Lex Luther don't got no powers. And he's stupid. Gwarsh.

Ooo... creepy. This was a nice little piece. Nitpicks: "It’s no concern of your’ mother’s" should be "It’s no concern of your mother’s" and "she chopped off it's head" should ...

Eighth- "Maybe. But you'll be wasting your time. I won't tell you a thing," the girl hissed. I didn't care, honestly. I just wanted to make her pay. Pay for ...

Orelia| Dawno's Smoking Pit | 3:20 PM | Level 0.8- I hadn't been able to resist- I had followed them into Dawno's office, into the chamber. I had kept to ...