ToritheMonster

Hey there!so, I really liked this. I just have a few nitpicks, in red: I cannot think of a time when I did not hate ; when people only truly ...

Hey! So, this was a really nice piece. You really did a great job, and no nitpicks really jumped out at me. I did have a small problem with your ...

Name: Saraphina (Sara) Mack Age: 18 3/4 Power:Electricity . She can control it, and turn into electricity if needed. Appearance: When she uses her powers: otherwise: Personality: Sara's very energetic

Okay, the SB is off to a lovely start. After everyone's gotten a few posts in, and the SB is flowing smoothly, we should introduce some sort of event. Any ...

ditto, girl.

Well, we're picking up after the war is over. If you read the old SB, Eighth just sort of... left her alone. So you're most likely back with the other ...

Hehe, I love Phantom. Thanks a bunch! I'll work on it.

*prepares to wake up VERY early*

yay!

Lolol. Yeah, I tend to call people that.

Woot! First bad guy post! Eighth- "Your majesty." Greeted the man, bowing low. I sharpened one of my daggers on the edge of my crown. Who in their right mind ...

'fraid not... TUBM is American.

True dat, homie W.

Yeah, I had the burnout for almost three months. It was awful!After a while, I just sort of forced myself to write. At first, I just felt awful, but the ...

Hehehe thanks. Yeah... well, it's sort of supposed to sound a bit like rape... my whole story's creepy like that. Thanks so much. I'm off to make some changes now! ...