ToritheMonster

No! Second page!

hey there! So, this is an okay poem. It's clean, easy to read, and to the point. It's best point is the emotion. You feel sad when you read it, ...

Wow! This was an awesome poem!I can't really critique you without repeating what's been said, so I'll just shower you with compliments. I love your style. Most people see the ...

I absolutely loved these poems, especially the second one. It was so light-hearted and funny. And I agree with Tatra, proton pie does sound awesome. I like the first one, ...

Bondgirl007 and jamesbondguy I don't know either of them, but it just seems so right.

Heys! Its-a-me, Dreamy, here to review.Sort of. I don't know why, but I feel like I've read this before. Anyway, it was jolly to read it again. I like this ...

Hi! SO, I kinda loved this a lot. I used to suffer from insomnia (hehe not anymore)and I totally understand this poem. I found it to be quite emotional, and ...

Hey there! So, everyone else has nitpicked this, so I'm not gonna bother. I'll just comment on it in general. So, i rather liked this. I appreciate freeform poetry, like ...

Wow! This is an extremely good piece. I love your style. Some very good points you had are as follows. The first is the emotions you portray. You feel sad ...

huh. never heard that word in me life. And whitetiger, what was your little idea?

Hiya! So, this poem was okay. It started out very nice, and I could almost feel like I was on one of those long, dreaded car rides. But then you ...

Known for lovin' a VPM.

Okay. Thanks for the review. Yeah, there's a whole 150 pages before this that might have helped to clear it up... but yeah. Thanks for the (much needed) help!

Hey there! I'll review you today. Now, I might come across as a bit harsh, but I'm giving you this review to help you, so your writing can grow. To ...

Cowed? Last time I checked she was not a bovine... hmmm....