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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: My Sign is Vital, My Hands are Cold

    Love that song! It's called Human, by the way, not Are We Human. Overall, interesting piece. You give us some nice characters, an interesting plot. I'd like to know more, ...

    Jul 17, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: First Story-- part 12 *Please Review*

    Oh, thank you! That is the nicest compliment I've ever gotten on YWS. *skips away merrily* *turns back* There's a part 13, if you wan to read it. It's in ...

    Jul 17, 2010
  • Randomosity Re: smiley!!

    :@) pig @> ice cream

    Jul 16, 2010
  • Archive Re: Scattered: No Longer Retired (full)

    Wisp- God, I hated Boner. He just had to ruin a good fight. I followed him for a while, seething. I didn't work for him. I worked under Darkeyes, and ...

    Jul 16, 2010
  • Archive Re: Scattered: No Longer Retired (full)

    EDIT: i was looking at the wrong page when I posted this...

    Jul 16, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Good Summer Romance Reads :)

    Souless by Gail Carriger Awesome book. It's a romance novel with steampunk, and also vampires and werewolves.IT'S NOT LIKE TWILIGHT. Believe me, I wouldn't have read it if it was ...

    Jul 16, 2010
  • Archive Re: Scattered: No Longer Retired (full)

    Wisp: The man threw a desperate punch at Stacy, and I materialized. Who was this crazy? I wisped through him. A super, then, as I absorbed his powers. Immediately, my ...

    Jul 16, 2010
  • Archive Re: Scattered: No Longer Retired (full)

    Wisp,2:01 PM I was glad Stacy had found me. Well, she hated that I called her by her real name. But that was, naturally why I did it.I had been ...

    Jul 16, 2010
  • Writing Tips Re: Kissing scene tips, please?

    I sure could use some, specifically from people who have written them themselves. I prefer first0hand experience over articles. What should I avoid? What do I need to have?

    Jul 16, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Wedding Present!

    Lovely job! That's an understatement. This is bloody brilliant. I can't find anything to critique to be honest.Smart move to not use the flash. I would love a picture of ...

    Jul 16, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Charcoal Drawing

    Very nice! As ,of course, you can't go back and fix it, I won't really critique the picture itself. Although it's quite good. Here are some tips on drawing eyes: ...

    Jul 16, 2010
  • Archive Re: Pied Piper

    Another female spot.

    Jul 16, 2010
  • Archive Re: Scattered: No Longer Retired (full)

    Would somebody mind bringing me in?

    Jul 16, 2010
  • Randomosity Re: What random thing did you do today?

    I discovered how to make Milkyway chocochinno. Previously, I had just been putting in the Milkyway packet into the machine on the coffee setting, as I had somehow missed both ...

    Jul 16, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Geek Moments

    Geek moment: I played Final Fanstasy III. My Dark Mage leveled up. (nuff said)

    Jul 15, 2010


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