ToritheMonster

Banned for living in an illegal residence. You're not allowed to live in a seashell.

hehehe. That I am. Skins, yours is done. I think I might have double posted by accident... my internet's being funny.

Hiya Skins. So, I quite enjoyed this. I don't really have many nitpicks, so I'll just give you my overall review. I think this is turning into an interesting story. ...

Hiya Skins. So, I quite enjoyed this. I don't really have many nitpicks, so I'll just give you my overall review. I think this is turning into an interesting story. ...

Hiya Skins. So, I quite enjoyed this. I don't really have many nitpicks, so I'll just give you my overall review. I think this is turning into an interesting story. ...

Flower's is done. Off to do Skin's.

Heya flower, here as requested. I think everyone else has covered my nitpicks, so I'll just give you my overall feelings. So, this poem had a depressing feel to it. ...

Mo, yours is done. I'm bout to do flower's and then Skins's.

Heya doll. I have a lot of nitpicks for this one. Here it goes, in red. Chapter 1 High school sucks. If anyone tries to tell you different, it’s a ...

*gasps* reviews? For me? I'll hop to it!

okay, thanks.

I agree with what Fire said. This poem isn't up to your usual (very, very high) standards. It's not bad, but not quite up to what we're used to from ...

I agree with Eli. This shows potential, but the overall look is very awkward. Her body is rather disproportionate. If you fix the things Eli mentioned, it should fix that ...

Hi! So, I quite liked these.Since I don't know what either of these people really look like, I can't correct their appearance, but I think that both drawings are very ...

Heya! So,I thought this was an interesting poem. The words all flowed together beautifully, and you used some great language. Overall, I'm afraid to say that I didn't really understand ...