ToritheMonster

stela, yours is done.

Oh man, this is so much better. I can freely admit now that I didn't even read the first one entirely, it was that bad. But this one, I'll be ...

Horseradish, yours is done. Ill do yours as soon as I can, stela.

Name: Sephira Wednesday Age:Looks late teens/early twenties. Just celebrated her 500th birthday. Gender: female Type:Breed- Vampire and Lycan Appearance: but with eyes like these: Personality: Sephira

Name: Gizmo Sprolick Age:he looks around 20, but is really 180 Gender:male Type:Lycan Appearance: Personality: Gizmo is probably the most easy-going guy you will ever meet.You'd almost think he's stup

Heya! Here as requested! So, I quite enjoyed this. Your imagery was very cool, and it all flowed quite smoothly. As the others have said, my one problem was the ...

Certainly. And you should join the group!

Calls a girl!

No problem. Ew. Physics.

Gasps! You have synestesia? Or is this poem coincidental?

Stela, yours is done.

Hi, Stela! Okay, I'm not going to nitpick this, both because other people have, and because there are really too many mistakes to fix. When you write, be sure to ...

Okay, Seemingly, yours is done! Gosh, that took me a long time. I'll start on yours now, stela.

Hello, Seemingly! Okay, this is gonna be an uber-long review, but I don't mind. This was really good. First, I'll give you my nitpicks and comments in red . If ...

This was very cool! Here's my edits, in red: Killing the sun and stopping the glow, The moon plots her jealous revenge. Venus and mars cannot intervene, Both busy battling ...