ToritheMonster

Brandon Flowers from The Killers- Micheal Buble! Inception guy! And other inception guy! I can't remember their names... i think the second one is Arthur, and the first one is ...

Ninja! Hi! Thank you for informing me about you. Okay, bye.

I feel like I should post a picture so I don't seem like a creepy person who obsessively looks at this thread and comments on how pretty people are. I'm ...

De nadie. Your first one's done. I'll do the second as soon as you post it.

Here as requested! My comments/corrections are in red . If I see something that I think would sound better if worded differently, I'll put my suggested sentence next to it ...

Just a few days left, guys!

Name: Bet Miller Age: 18 Gender:female Appearance: Bet's about five six, with flaming red hair and piercing blue eyes. She's thin and athletic from a life on the streets. Personality: ...

Every seen Oliver? Roland's a bit like Fagin, hm? I'll call a girl.

oh. meh. it wasn't claimed when I typed that... huh. whatever. Alright, I'll go for air.

So, I sort of invaded that story... hope that's okay.

Avie- This was the weirdest dream ever. Well,at least it had good food. And now, we were off. I smoothed out my new dress. The prince, or that's who they ...

can I reserve a spot for the fire element in London?

Avie- Some guy walked out of the giant tree house Claire had brought me to. "I'm Avie. Um, I guess this is a dream or something, but I've been told ...

You're so pretty! What happened to your knee? Didja fall?

Oh, sorry. I couldn't tell, the pictures won't load on my comp. And I actually have seen lazer guns.... but they're a couple million pounds a pop. Maybe Gizmo made ...